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tsynr's avatar

Consider using the word "communicating" or "sharing" instead of "email" in the game prep paragraph. I've learned recently from my younger coworkers that emails are corporate and dated.

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phillcalle's avatar

Thank you, tsynr. I'll change "email" to "leave calling card with servant." j/k...I am curious what the youths use to transmit messages longer than a text, and I do like your suggestion to make that wording less particular and more generally applicable.

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tsynr's avatar

longer than a text? blog it on substack I guess ;)

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